🔥We're back with another Amazon design roast for a bottle on a mission! Sadly,
By George Barnett Reid 👀 · April 3, 2024 · Curated by George's Blog
🔥We're back with another Amazon design roast for a bottle on a mission! Sadly, we don't know what they're on a mission for, but hopefully, we can help them find their PATH (see what I did there) with these simple tweaks:
🔨 Mission statement clarity: "Not just a water bottle. A bottle on a mission" is unclear. Are we saving the world? Revolutionizing hydration? Jellyfish hunting?
🔨 Image Flow: The image of the bottles at the top disrupts the flow and visual hierarchy of the design. This could be relocated further down to showcase variety.
🔨 Features Description: "a bottle designed to be refilled and reused" isn't cutting it. Directly stating the product’s differentiating features and benefits would give potential customers clear reasons to buy.
🔨 Text Alignment: This is key to a professional look. Ensuring all text is properly aligned would clean up the presentation considerably.
🔨 Background Consistency: Consistent or contrasting backgrounds would eliminate any visual confusion and enhance the focus on the product. A uniform backdrop can also increase brand recognition.
🔨 Sustainability Story: There’s mention of sustainability, but expanding on this with impactful visuals or infographics could strengthen the brand’s commitment to environmental causes.
With these tweaks, @drinkpathwater could make its way out of Bikini Bottom and into the hands of more fun-loving, eco-conscious kids and adults alike 🪼 🫧
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